WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tyrese this is BRILLIANT! I LOVE the colour of your writing and the your pictures, but maybe you can do a bit less pictures and a bit more writing.
I love the use of the simile because it is good where it takes place. It’s quite a funny story and next time, instead of a list you could turn it in to the story :]
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tyrese this is BRILLIANT! I LOVE the colour of your writing and the your pictures, but maybe you can do a bit less pictures and a bit more writing.
I love the use of the simile because it is good where it takes place. It’s quite a funny story and next time, instead of a list you could turn it in to the story :]