I really love your work because your writing is very nice and joyful. I love your powerful adjectives. I recommend that you should use a different word for ‘he’.
I personally think that, at the start you make sense. e.g dreamed.
depside that, I love it because the deception of the writing.
thered of all the bit were it said “varjak could not stand his hungryness” 🙂
I personally think that, at the start you make sense. e.g dreamed. Maby next time.
Despite that, I love it because the deception of the writing.
thered of all the bit were it said “varjak could not stand his hungriness” 🙂
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I really love your work because your writing is very nice and joyful. I love your powerful adjectives. I recommend that you should use a different word for ‘he’.
I personally think that, at the start you make sense. e.g dreamed.
depside that, I love it because the deception of the writing.
thered of all the bit were it said “varjak could not stand his hungryness” 🙂
I personally think that, at the start you make sense. e.g dreamed. Maby next time.
Despite that, I love it because the deception of the writing.
thered of all the bit were it said “varjak could not stand his hungriness” 🙂