Wow that was brilliant! I really felt like I was there and you also have beautiful vocabulary. Maybe next time you could add some more sentences about how you felt. 🙂
Ralph, i recommend you could have used more information and more cracking words again and i think you could have written more? But maybe next time. I think you did really well with your spellings. It was a really good story.
Wow that was brilliant! I really felt like I was there and you also have beautiful vocabulary. Maybe next time you could add some more sentences about how you felt. 🙂
Ralph, i recommend you could have used more information and more cracking words again and i think you could have written more? But maybe next time. I think you did really well with your spellings. It was a really good story.
Well done Ralph, that blew my mind! It felt like i was there. Ralph i think you can do more exciting words. 😉 🙂
I felt like i was there Ralph. VERY good use of words and adjectiveas!:)