This is GREAT ! I loved the way that it is different colors! Also, there is adventurous grammar and figurative language. But personally, when you wrote at midday rain stroke his back, it did not make sense.
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This is GREAT ! I loved the way that it is different colors! Also, there is adventurous grammar and figurative language. But personally, when you wrote at midday rain stroke his back, it did not make sense.