I love the way you described everything. how did you come up with all those adjectives? Next time remember to use a question mark after a question.
(“but what if his lordship finds us,…”
you forgot the question mark
I really like the description it is very detailed. The adjectives are amazing and they are very varied. There were a few mistakes in the punctuation and grammar though. What happens next?
I love the way you described everything. how did you come up with all those adjectives? Next time remember to use a question mark after a question.
(“but what if his lordship finds us,…”
you forgot the question mark
I love how you described how Emily looked like in that stage. Try make it a bit longer. What is Rosie doing right now?
I really like the description it is very detailed. The adjectives are amazing and they are very varied. There were a few mistakes in the punctuation and grammar though. What happens next?