rudy

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4 Responses to rudy

  1. roges says:

    great story i loved the part when you described the lordships bed. i would add a exclamation mark at the end!

  2. gorrw says:

    that was a great part of your writing keep up the cool work but maybe try and make it more formal next time, where did you get this idea from?

  3. bezem says:

    well done i did not think about doing it in that perspective starting with Emily and Lizzie maybe next time try more complex and flowing sentences. IF not
    WELL DONE
    🙂

  4. farrr says:

    thanks 🙂 i will take that in my stride

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