saddiq

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2 Responses to saddiq

  1. scilj says:

    This is a very good story Saddiq!!!
    I think you could improve on your grammar a bit and also I don’t think that you need to change the font.
    Do you think they said ‘I swear’ in that time?

  2. mengm says:

    The story is very imaginative!
    I think you should improve on the grammar though. What’s going to happen next?!

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