Great details but I suggest because you have two people don’t call both a person call them people and what is the thing near the end?
It’s great I like you’re picture it is so colourful. You could write some fun facts? Maybe you can write some more?
I liked how you shode wate your pichers are did you like the games ? you could have route more .
Cool picture, I like the picture of the game. Perhaps you could give the people eyes? How did you get such straight lines?
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Great details but I suggest because you have two people don’t call both a person call them people and what is the thing near the end?
It’s great I like you’re picture it is so colourful.
You could write some fun facts?
Maybe you can write some more?
I liked how you shode wate your pichers are
did you like the games ?
you could have route more .
Cool picture, I like the picture of the game. Perhaps you could give the people eyes? How did you get such straight lines?