Nice youse of adjectives and fronted adverbials:)
Wow! you really put me into Mesopotamia, wonderful. maybe you could use a different word for shouting like bellowed or yelled. 🙂
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Ralph you have used most of your five senses. Were the raspberries sweet or savory:) you could use more adjectives.
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Nice youse of adjectives and fronted adverbials:)
Wow! you really put me into Mesopotamia, wonderful. maybe you could use a different word for shouting like bellowed or yelled. 🙂
🙁
Ralph you have used most of your five senses. Were the raspberries sweet or savory:) you could use more adjectives.
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