samuel varjak

Posted on October 31, 2016 by Deleted User
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1 Response to samuel varjak

  1. vekel says:
    November 7, 2016 at 2:31 pm

    Samuel I love that you have used personification like dancing palm trees.
    Next time you could improve on not changing person.
    The best part was when you wrote “Then Varjak looked up to the sky and saw clouds that looked like cotton candy”. 🙂 🙂 🙂

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