Samuel I love that you have used personification like dancing palm trees.
Next time you could improve on not changing person.
The best part was when you wrote “Then Varjak looked up to the sky and saw clouds that looked like cotton candy”. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Samuel I love that you have used personification like dancing palm trees.
Next time you could improve on not changing person.
The best part was when you wrote “Then Varjak looked up to the sky and saw clouds that looked like cotton candy”. 🙂 🙂 🙂