Your work is AMAZING! Personally I will put a he after he dreamed. What I love about your work is that you put a lot of description in your writing and always used full-stops and capital letters.(:
Dilana I personally love that you have used the word ‘content’ in your blog because it’s such a powerful adjective.
I also like that you have used an amazing amount of the five senses which makes me feel like I am actually there.
Maybe next time, you could improve on some spelling errors that you have made. 🙂
I loved that great job! I really liked the way you put your self into your story.
Excellent work! I liked it when used powerful words .
I recommend you check your spellings because I know your a good writer.
Dilana, I really liked your story but your first 3 words do not make sense together. Maybe next time you could try to less rush rather than that your story was lovely.
Your work is AMAZING! Personally I will put a he after he dreamed. What I love about your work is that you put a lot of description in your writing and always used full-stops and capital letters.(:
Dilana I personally love that you have used the word ‘content’ in your blog because it’s such a powerful adjective.
I also like that you have used an amazing amount of the five senses which makes me feel like I am actually there.
Maybe next time, you could improve on some spelling errors that you have made. 🙂
dilana i love that you have used lots of powerfull adjectives:)
I loved that great job! I really liked the way you put your self into your story.
Excellent work! I liked it when used powerful words .
I recommend you check your spellings because I know your a good writer.
Dilana, I really liked your story but your first 3 words do not make sense together. Maybe next time you could try to less rush rather than that your story was lovely.
I love your work and there is lot of colours.