I love the way you have used such powerful verbs such as edged and adjectives such as mysterious and gloomy.
Personally I think that you should not describe the character so much.
The thing I like the most in this story is the way you described the character such as “He had eyes as amber of fire.” and “Varjak Paw was a pure-bred Mesopotamian Blue cat.”
nice youse of adjectives
I like the colour of the writing but the title is a bit blinding
Nice work Jude! I love your work, its brilliant i suggest that at the end you should put suspense (:
I love the way you have used such powerful verbs such as edged and adjectives such as mysterious and gloomy.
Personally I think that you should not describe the character so much.
The thing I like the most in this story is the way you described the character such as “He had eyes as amber of fire.” and “Varjak Paw was a pure-bred Mesopotamian Blue cat.”
I love your work ()